Your Shoe
It's justone more red tearone morereal fearOne morescream you can't hearThat's rightdon't worrynone 'bout meI'm justone morestreakOne morefreakunderyourshoe...."Where is my rusted knight? I have let...
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This is a most very interesting read. Very cleverly written. I enjoyed this very much.. and welcome to the Maelstrom.. I look forward to reading more of your work. ~Mystic~~"When you're on, I swear...
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Greetings, Weavers Fae ~ Quite interesting...says a lot in a relatively few words...nice work!Cheers! HarryYa'll are invited to come visit me at www.gillelands.com/poetry/
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again ... my welcome to the maelstrom ... a powerful entrance made ... this piece resonates with pain ... I have been small enough to the be the one under the shoe ... many times ... creative and well...
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::waving, and smiling:: Weavers Fae? Oh, yes, I remember your work!!I love your talent and the way your words speak to me!!This is so clever and such a deeply moving piece!!Simply love it...A white...
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WeaversFae,Wow, it never ceases to amaze me how much can actually be said in such a brief poem.. I liked the simplistic way you wrote this, it seemed to emphasize your powerful message. I know these...
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Thank y'all very much. The library is closing now, so I can't say much, I promise with my heart I will be back soon to thank you properly. Time is precious, and I haven't had much of it.Twightlight! I...
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Ah...this is the style I remember...good to have you posting with us, Fae...such a simple and yet compelling piece of writing...whittled down to the bare essence, and yet packing a real...
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Sharon,Don't we all? Thank youMystic,Thank you for that wonderful welcome. And if it was interesting enough to catch your eye, then I dun good. :PLaHarry,Sometimes it's best to say the least!!And...
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